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Okay so hope you guys enjoy this. I know you were all really excited for it and I only hope I did it justice!

I'm not saying shit-else right here bc I know you're reading this part before you read the chapter. Be at least a bit surprised.

My fav chapter to write so far. Then ch 50 is a close second.

Let me know...

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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

THAT WAS ONE OF THE MOS ROUGHEST, SEXIEST AND MOST LOVING STORIES AND SEX SCENES I HAVE EVER READ!!!! I HAVE SO MANY BITE MARKS ON MY HANDS AND SCRATCH MARKS ON MY CHEST FROM READING THIS CARMEN I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS AND THIS IS BY FAR MY FAVORITE CHAPTER OUT THE ENTIRE STORY!!!! I FELT LIKE I JUST HAD SEX READING THIS!!!! OMGF, I FUCKING LOVE THIS!!!!!

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YOU ARE SO TRUE AND JUST GOD I AM RAVING RED AND SO SCARRED FROM THIS BITE MARK. IT'S OFFICIAL.
I'M A MASCHOSIST!!!

I must tell you it was really vivid and I could actually like see myself there and I went through the fucking experience. I bit my hand until it almost bleed. I scratch my chest until I felt horrible pain and I'm pretty sure I was twitching.

I think this was a wonderful chapter, you did an outstanding job and I cannot wait for more of this lovely story and more excellent writing from such a talented, beautiful and amazingly descriptive writer such as yourself love!!

Btw, if you didn't know.....I'M CURRENTLY IN LOVE WITH THIS CHAPTER AND YOUR GENIUS MIND!!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>