TenderRevenge

In a single moment One decision could ruin every thing All the work it took to get there Every scar it took to save Every memory kept Was never enough was it? Here we are Bleeding now I don't want to heal anymore

Thor had grievously underestimated him, when he assumed that Loki's magic was but a meager defense. Weak, womanly talents, their use dismissible only due to his upbringing in a foreign land, and therefore exposed to alternative teachings and trainings. In Asgard, the use of seidr was a talent performed expressly by the womenfolk. No man, no warrior, would ever dream of subjecting himself to ridicule by mastering such coy trickery. Yet his consort to be didn’t seem to grasp this realm wide understanding, nor had he cared, when Thor had so carefully explained that those who practiced sorcery were of the majority women. Men kept to the sph

Chapter One The ringing of the alarm next to Shannon’s bed made him groan in protest. He got dressed like he usually did when he didn’t have work and walked down stairs to start the coffeemaker. It was 8:15 A.M.; too early for him to be hearing his name being called out from upstairs. “Shannon? Shanni…” Jared’s voice was quieter than expected and it slightly concerned the older brother. “Hold on, Jay! I’m coming!” Shannon called back quickly as he poured two cups of freshly brewed coffee and placed them gingerly on the kitchen table. Rushing up the stairs two at a time, the elder Leto m

1) Dialogue in fiction is nothing like how people talk in real life. It’s fine to use “as heard in real-life” phrasing, but real-life dialogue is often meaningless. Ideally, every word of dialogue in fiction should serve a purpose and progress the plot or character development. If it has more than one meaning (subtext), all the better. 2) Start the conversation late and exit early. No one wants to read small talk, hellos, or goodbyes unless they add meaning to the story … which is almost never. 3) No info dumping in dialogue, please. Only put quotation marks around what you can actually envision the character saying